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Post by beigeheart on May 19, 2010 14:37:07 GMT -5
Because I absolutely love Haiku- and they are the only thing I am honestly good at. Here are some of mine. For those of you that don't know-
A haiku is a three lined poem.
The first line is 5 syllables.
The second line is 7 syllables.
The third line is 5 syllables.
Fifteen syllables in all, correct? Of course, some might seem non-syllabic, depending on how you pronounce these. Such as the word "our". I pronounce it "awre". Some people may pronounce it "ow er". Okay? It just depends on your pronunciation. OKAY GOT IT? So here I go. ;3
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Oh, all powerful;
how you echo through my mind!
I will salute you.
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Recognizable
ambition that powers us;
flee! Flee far and fast!
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How the injustice
of my /friends/ and in favour;
does this hatred lie!
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How dare you villain;
who slays and drinks my life blood
look down upon me!
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Oh, forgotten!
River of eternity;
sparkling beauty!
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You too have done this;
have hurt and betrayed my trust!
without shame or guilt...
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Silence and forget!
How dare you speak to me so?
Such spiteful disgust!
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A tide of hatred;
splashed upon my spiteful heart!
Wreaking bitter hurt.
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Oh, what are these /friends/?
Betrayers, haters, and lies!
No longer my love.
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The feared great sins!
Announced in seven faces;
then, what are we naught?
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Oh, beautiful love!
With your joy and honesty;
hurt my angry heart!
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Follow the river.
It leads you to great glory;
and eternal life.
MORE TO COME IF YOU ENJOYED THESE.
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Post by { . I V Y . } on May 19, 2010 19:51:40 GMT -5
I ENJOYED. PLEASE DELIVER MORE.
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