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Post by S K Y;♥ on Jun 8, 2010 17:22:20 GMT -5
The next morning, when I awoke, I decided I would look into all these rapings. It was occuring so often, sooo I might as well. I tried to get everyone else's help but they didn't seem to give a crap about it. I forced them to help me. Then, I had to drag them one by one into the van. I drove aimlessly, searching for some source of the rapes. Then, I found this random abandoned building. Normally, people wouldn't just waltz up into an abandoned building, but because of the fact that I am insane, I did. And, I forced everyone else to come with me. Surprisingly, they were willing to come. I guess they got a thrill out of going into strange places...Anyways, we poked around the building for a bit. And then we heard this high pitched laughing like someone was high after smoking a few joints. We all looked up and saw this guy dressed up like a hooker. The guy said his name was Cranberry, which was a little weird (and gay) cause it was similar to Berry's also gay name. So we told him why we were there and he grinned widely in a scary way, like that guy back in DisneyLand.
So he said, "Well that's a disease called Rapincocentesis." He grabbed Berry and pulled his pants down, "The main symptom is a huge pimple on your genitals." He held up Berry's balls to demonstrate. Berry freaked out, pulled up his pants and hid behind the hermaphrodite kid. Max turned around and pushed Berry back to the front. "Maybe he has this disease," Max suggested. Cranberry nodded and said, "We'll have to lock him up." Then he grabbed Berry by the ear and dragged him through a doorway. It locked behind him. Well crap, I thought. We needed to figure out the cure. But the cure could have been anything. So we resumed poking around. Max found an old man in a freezer, drinking a bottle of wine. Max examined his genitals and the man was healed, he explained that the wine had healed him. So we got a bunch of bottles of wine and barged into the lab where Cranberry was raping Berry. Max grabbed Berry and pinned him down. I shoved the bottle of wine down his throat. And Lo and Behold, Berry was cured. We gave wine to everyone else and set them free. Unfortunately they got drunk and started raping other people. Then I decided it was a thing of sheer will. Oh yeah, and we also put Cranberry in a box and shipped him off to Madagascar, where he was eaten by ravenous lemurs.
As we were walking out of the building, we saw that the clouds were getting rather dark. We decided we would take shelter back inside the building. The rain began pouring down and we sat around with all the weirdos who were drinking wine. One of them asked me if I was willing to give him a blowjob. I politely replied 'no', but when he persisted I slapped him and he didn't bother any of us again. As the rain was letting up, a flash of light lit up the area. Berry went outside to see if it was lightning. He insisted it was a talking potato on fire, but we all thought it was lightning.
It turned out neither of us were right. As soon as he went outside, he ran right back in. Only a moment after, an enormous metal object crashed down in front of the building, catching it on fire. We all rushed outside the back and went to see what had fallen from the sky.
"The sky is falling! The sky is falling!" Berry ran around in circles screaming it.
Jade walked over to him and tripped him, then he stayed quiet. Kittie walked over to the metal object and touched it. It had a huge metal lense on the side. The lense popped out and Kittie picked it up.
"No, don't!" Shallow yelled. "It's probably some terrorist thingimabob!"
"I think I'll push this button," Kittie said, eying the tiny blue button.
She pushed it and the lense-thing exploded. Kittie was vaporized right then and there. Berry clapped and yelled 'good show!' for moments after. Then Berry jumped over to where the lense-thing had popped out and looked through the space it had been in. It was a tube leading inside the object. Then something green darted out and latched itself onto his face.
Berry ripped the little green thing off his face and threw it at the big metal object. It bounced off and landed on the ground. When I got a little closer, I realized it was an alien, and the metal object was its spaceship. It oped its little mouth to speak.
"The planet!" it squealed. "To save the planet, you must-"
Just then, right before it said what we needed to save the planet, Berry slammed his shoe down on the alien and rubbed it around a little bit. When he lifted it up, the alien was stuck to the bottom and he scraped it off on a tree. There he was, a little green man splattered all over a tree.
"Stupid bug..." Berry mumbled.
We all decided we'd ignore the message from the little green alien, and assume it was just an attempt to attack us, and went to Wal-Mart to make fun of all the ugly people. Berry took pictures of the weirdest people on his phone, and sent them to that site People of Wal-Mart. One man walked in in a speedo, and I dared Berry to whistle at him. He did, the man turned around, and pulled a gun on him.
"Alright, nobody move! This is a gay stick-up!"
"No! I'm too pretty to be gay!" Berry screamed.
"I'm gonna make out with this hot guy right here, and then I'll take all your moneys and leave," he said.
Berry slapped his gay lips away, but when the speedo-man put the gun to Berry's neck, he puckered his lips and closed his eyes. As the man pulled the gun slowly away, Jade jumped on his back screaming 'giddee-up, horsee!'. He fired his gun into the air as she rode around on his back. A crowd gathered around us all and finally a man stepped forward. Then this one guy stepped forward and spoke.
"AJ? What are you doing? You know I've been chasing you for awhile!" the dude said.
"Jason, I'm sorry, but there just isn't that spark I always imagined when we're kissing," AJ said.
"I'll do better! I promise!" Jason pleaded.
"OK, fine. Come on, let's go find some place quiet to do our business."
After that, we all agreed it was time to go find some place to stay. We found some big house owned by this famous stripper who called herself Night. She let us stay there, so we did. I had to share a bed with Shallow and Mist. Berry was in a bed with Ivy and Night, who had forced him to sleep next to her. Everyone else slept in Night's little bed. I fell asleep to the sound of Night's super-loud snoring.
______________ PS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Max typed some and Berry typed some. <3
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Post by max on Jun 9, 2010 7:10:25 GMT -5
Well Skai, this is when you should turn to me for help. Okay so the last line, about al the rapings, its a disease. Mhm, make a disease called rapincotesis. Its where people go crazy and have to have sex all the time in order to live. Then you guys go to find the cure, and then you find a old hospital which turns out to have been an asylum in the early 1300's. Reasonable, right? ANd you find all these half naked ppl locked up in cages. And some pervert comes up and asks to diagnose you, of course Berry is the one that gets Rapincotesis so the pervert has to lock him away. Then you have to find the cure fast because if you don't, the pervert will rape all of the insane people, including Berry, and leave them to die. Then you find out that the cure is "da da da da" WINE!!!!!! Yes, WINE. So you feed them all wine and they go on a drunken ramapge throughout the city, and more people get raped. This is just an idea
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Post by S K Y;♥ on Jun 9, 2010 7:23:04 GMT -5
That is actually an excellent idea. I'll definitely be using most of it. ;] No offense to Berry, but it's a WAYY better idea than an earthquake opening the ground and us falling through and going to the "land of the lost" with a bunch of dinosaurs and then a whole bunch of naked black women raping you. Yeah, that idea is just...retarded. NO OFFENSE. ILY BERRY .
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Post by S K Y;♥ on Jun 13, 2010 17:05:02 GMT -5
So, I am totally gonna stop typing this story. o3o I wanted to go to chapter twenty, but as you can see... I didn't make it that far. So, yeahh. If I somehow randomly get an amazing idea that I just HAVE to use, then I will definitely type another chapter. But, other than that, I'm done. Besides, I'm pretty sure nobody reads it anymore. And if you happen to have any genius ideas, definitely let me know. If I like the idea I will be typing another chapter. <3.
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Post by { . I V Y . } on Jun 13, 2010 17:14:40 GMT -5
I read it D: But yeh It's kinda deadd. haha.<3 It was a really awesome story. Maybe we can make a comic together of us all on the site. i really feel like doin a comic. o3o
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Post by S K Y;♥ on Jun 13, 2010 20:21:28 GMT -5
that's actually a good idea. and sounds super fun. but how would we do that...? O3o
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Post by { . I V Y . } on Jun 14, 2010 6:34:00 GMT -5
Like. I draw chapter 1's comic pages, then you'd draw chapter 2's comic pages. then once we have all the chapters done we'd post em. :]
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Post by max on Jun 16, 2010 9:54:00 GMT -5
Could I make a sequel to this story? But like, less perverted and more....idk can I make sequel though?
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Post by S K Y;♥ on Jun 16, 2010 10:12:47 GMT -5
MKAI, IVY. <3 We should get started on that soon. :]
And, Max. I prefer people don't make a sequel to my story. Besides, if anybody makes a sequel, it will be me. :]
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Post by S K Y;♥ on Jun 16, 2010 10:33:46 GMT -5
C H A P T E R T H I R T E E N. When I awoke the next morning, still in the house of Night, the famous stripper, she had made us breakfast. I honestly didn't think a stripper could be nice, but hey, who's complaining? So, we all ate the eggs and bacon and sausage and stuff that she had prepared and the next thing ya know, we all pass out. I woke up a little while later, wondering to myself were I was at. We were tied up on torture wheels or whatever. What used to be an ultra perverted, yet super fun life, was turning out to be a horror movie.
Night had an extra wheel that had different methods of torture on it. Berry was first, as usual. He had to eat Night's crap. I cringed and shuttered at the sight of it and tightly shut my eyes so I would not have to look. Berry had brown splotches all around his mouth now. Ew. Next was Ivy. She had to let Night whip her with a whip repeatedly for a minute. When that was over, Ivy hard large pinkish red welps on her skin. Poor Ivy. I hated seeing that happen to her since she was one of my best friends. Next was Shallow. Night spun the wheel and it landed on a picture of a dog. Apparently she had to give the dog a blow job which was absolutely disgusting. I didn't watch that either. When it finally came around to my turn, I had to take a shower with Night's mentally retarded son who was about twenty eight years old. That was so terrifying. My life had went from all fun and games to horrible torture and death bringing ways. I honestly was frightened. I wanted to die. Living a life of torture was WAY worse than putting up with Berry and everyone else. I wanted to cry. This was the end. For all of us. That night when she sent us off to bed, cuts and bruises all over our bodies, we laid down in the beds she provided and cried ourselves to sleep.
The next morning, we weren't even in Night's house, or at least I did not think so. We were in a pitch black room and had no idea where each other was, so we were walking around, attempting to find an escape route and constantly bumping in to each other, until I finally found a slight ray of hope. I thought I felt a door knob, so when I twisted it and pushed the door, it didn't budge. I fell to the ground in defeat and sighed. Again, I wanted to cry. It had only been about twenty four hours since we came to this house and I was already about to kill myself.
"Guys...This sucks. I'm about to commit suicide or go insane or something."
No reply. Either they already died or they thought I was already crazy. Then I heard Ivy cough so I knew they were alive. Again, I sighed and laid on the floor. When I did, I felt tiny furry things suddenly crawl on me. Spiders. I hated spiders. I had arachnophobia. I quickly jumped up and screamed. Then I heard saw a clown come from the darkness, bright red hair, a big round red nose, sharp and bloody teeth, and blood red eyes. I screamed again. Night must be using our worst fears against us. Berry started screaming "AHH! MONKEYS!" That was an odd fear to have. Shallow shouted " HELP ME! LONG WORDS ARE RUNNING THROUGH MY HEAD!" So, she had a fear of long words. This was killing me. I couldn't take it much longer. I just sat on the ground of the pitch black room, waiting for death to come my way...
_________________ Sorry its short!
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Post by { . I V Y . } on Jun 17, 2010 17:53:51 GMT -5
This is kind of creepyy<3 Chaptahh fourteenn!? <3
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Post by ~*Bright*~ on Jun 17, 2010 22:47:51 GMT -5
This series was good, but then when the raping stuff started happening, it got a little disturbing. A comic sounds like a neat idea, but you may want to be care on what you put in it. If you guys do do the comic, can I be in it?
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Post by /sablee//shadow/// on Jun 19, 2010 0:33:25 GMT -5
dudeee xD rape is yummy =] sorry i was all troll like earlierr Skyy o3o yourr gorgeous. and cool. and yourselff. ;3 yayy rape. and other random cool stuff o-o
if a comic happens, may i attempt a part?. i can not really create comics on myy computer, but i can use paper the old fashioned way. pen and ink would be best (wif sharpie of course!). i don't have any kind of art to do this summer so i could likee. do that. or try. x)
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Post by { . I V Y . } on Jun 19, 2010 6:14:24 GMT -5
Sure :3 I think that we can divide them pretty good.
We need chapter fifteen then each of us could just do five. Skaii?
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