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Post by IVY AND SKY. on Jun 5, 2010 11:06:37 GMT -5
A deputy is going to be appointed in WindClan. The leader chooses a deputy who isn't Birchclaw, and Birchclaw flips out. He attempts to attack the leader but is held back by the warriors of WindClan. He leaves the Clan to be a loner, seeking revenge. He looks for recruits to make a force strong enough to take over WindClan. While looking, Birchclaw finds a huge rogue band. He asks to have a few cats to take over WindClan but the leader, Rage, says no. Overcome with anger, Birchclaw attacks and kills Rage in an epic battle where they are both in danger of dying. The cats of the band watch in awe, afraid to do anything. When Rage is dead, Birchclaw elects his second in command, Wasp. After that, he takes Wasp on a walk through WindClan territory, making sure to stay near the RiverClan border so that he'll be safe there if a WindClan patrol comes along. While walking along the border, an apprentice see the two and smells the stench of a rogue. She listens and hears Birchclaw say he is going to attack WindClan, and announces the attack to all the Clans. Icepelt flees from the gathering and tells Birchclaw that WindClan knows of the attack. He immediately attacks WindClan. He attacks only moments after WindClan returns from the battle. Harepaw is told by the WindClan leader to go get help, and fetches the three other Clans to help. The three other Clans send patrols and the battle ends. Birchclaw, Wasp, Icepelt, a few rogues and a few Clan cats die. The cats who didn't die will be kept by their roleplayers, but they won't be treated like royalty or anything.
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Post by thirteen on Jun 6, 2010 16:46:09 GMT -5
Sounds like it could be epic. I'm all for it and I wouldn't mind having Longstride apply for the WindCLan deputy position.
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Post by { . I V Y . } on Jun 6, 2010 17:23:09 GMT -5
We already have a new deputy :c
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Post by fluttertorn on Jun 9, 2010 22:59:08 GMT -5
Okay; But we do need a new cat to be the cat that was rejected. this cat would be a LONER. he has a band of loner cats. Anyone may apply; so PLEASE APPLY!!!
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Post by duskpelt on Jun 28, 2010 18:01:19 GMT -5
I like the plot, but its not really a site wide plot. Its mostly based off of one clan, and the other clans are barely included. The plot would be much better if it was something more epic, and rightous. Something that really brought the clans together throughout the whole plot, not just the ending. And the main cats are all pretaken, which i find a bit lame. The only time others are really included is in the final battle, and in the loner group, and they wouldnt really be included at all, mostly just the cats chosen in the plot.
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Post by { . I V Y . } on Jun 29, 2010 7:32:27 GMT -5
Touche Dusk. We need a new plot then. Any ideas? D: -thinks-
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Post by duskpelt on Jun 29, 2010 13:25:45 GMT -5
I gave my idea a long time ago o.o but for an idea where the cats dont have to move?
Not reallu lol
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Post by { . I V Y . } on Jun 29, 2010 13:56:48 GMT -5
A white and black tom cat has been tricking the clans. He has been befreinding the members of the clans, tearing them apart from the inside. Stealing prey, kits, filling apprentices minds with evil thoughts, yet seeming totally innocent. Silent battles start inside each clan, the tension building up with clan-mates. The ones who know of the rouge's evil actions aren't believed, and soon are punished for their assumptions. After a few moons, each clan has grown very weak; and the rouge moves in for an attack. A huge war begins, and all the clan reunite together to face the band of evil cats. Who will win? The strong and rabid rouges? Or the weakened but more populated clans?
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